Primary Six: Don't Play at the Road
submitted by Abigail, Primary Six, Submitted as a writing practice
Composition Practice (1st Draft)
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Thank you Abigail, for submitting this piece of work.
Below is the original composition your have submitted for my feedback.
Below is the original composition your have submitted for my feedback.
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Do not be discouraged by the outcome of this composition. The most important thing is to learn from the mistake and avoid making them again. You have a lot of potential so do be vigilant and check your work frequently when writing!
Do not be discouraged by the outcome of this composition. The most important thing is to learn from the mistake and avoid making them again. You have a lot of potential so do be vigilant and check your work frequently when writing!