Primary Six: Winter Wonderland in Singapore - A Creative Writing Practice
submitted by Abigail, Primary Six, Submitted as a writing practice
Thank you Abigail, for submitting this piece of work.
Below is the composition your have submitted for my feedback.
Below is the composition your have submitted for my feedback.
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At first glance:
The first thing that came into my mind when I saw the question was that this is a very challenging one. It is not easy for anyone to describe an experience which is imaginary or uncommon. With very little prior knowledge, it will be difficult to describe and elaborate on an experience which has never been experienced. However, Abigail has done a commendable job!
The first thing that came into my mind when I saw the question was that this is a very challenging one. It is not easy for anyone to describe an experience which is imaginary or uncommon. With very little prior knowledge, it will be difficult to describe and elaborate on an experience which has never been experienced. However, Abigail has done a commendable job!
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Hope my feedback & suggestion are useful to you!
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